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Deal Breaker

by Susie Tate

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What is the book Deal Breaker about?

Susie Tate's Deal Breaker follows Poppy Sterling as she faces the Scottish Independent Retail Awards knowing Rory MacKenzie, the man who has treated her with contempt for years, will be watching her work. A slow-burn romance for readers who love banter and heroes with real history between them.

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Poppy Sterling has spent years building her life on her own terms, and the Scottish Independent Retail Awards should be a night to savor. Instead, she is jittery and insecure in a way her friend Josh has never seen, and the reason is simple and awful: Rory MacKenzie will be in the room. The man who has treated her with contempt for years is about to watch her work, and the prospect leaves her far more exposed than she wants to admit. Across a glittering season of galas, charity events, and public appearances, Poppy and Rory are thrown together again and again—and each encounter chips away at the careful distance between them.

Rory has his own walls, and Poppy has reasons to keep hers. But the friction between them keeps giving way to something softer and harder to deny, whether he is stepping between her and a man who won't take no for an answer, or she is letting him see past the polished exterior she shows everyone else. As their families, friends, and the press all take an interest in whatever is growing between them, Poppy and Rory must decide whether the pull they feel is worth the risk—of old wounds, of public scrutiny, and of finally being honest with each other.

Warm, sharp, and charged with slow-burn tension, Deal Breaker is for readers who love a hero and heroine with real history between them, banter that cuts as often as it comforts, and a romance that earns its emotional turns. Susie Tate delivers a story of two stubborn people discovering that the hardest person to be vulnerable with is the one who matters most.

Part 1 - Chapters 1 to 4

Poppy wants to look good for Rory at the awards and seeks reassurance from Josh, but her uncharacteristic insecurity alarms him and forces her to admit Rory will be there. She fusses over her appearance before the Scottish Independent Retail Awards, fishing for compliments in a way that is entirely unlike her, and Josh immediately clocks that something is off. When he presses her, she finally confesses the truth: Rory is going to be at the ceremony. The admission lands heavily, because it explains her nerves and because it means the man who has spent years treating her with contempt will be in the same room while she works. The confession does not bring her relief. If anything, saying it out loud makes the prospect more real, and she is left with the knowledge that she has just handed Josh the reason for every strange, jittery thing she has done all morning. Josh, for his part, now understands what he is dealing with, but understanding does not make the evening ahead any easier to face.

Poppy wants to power through the red carpet despite her nerves, and Josh's pep talk gets her game face on at the cost of her hiding her doubts. He talks her up, reminds her who she is, and she pulls on the polished, confident presenter persona she wears for the cameras. The trouble is that the performance works a little too well. Underneath the smile and the easy charm, she is still rattled, and she keeps that fear tucked away where no one, including Josh, can see it. The pep talk does its job on the surface, giving her the armour she needs to walk out under the lights, but it also gives her permission to bury the fear rather than deal with it, and that buried fear is what will be tested the moment Rory appears.

The Red Carpet

Poppy wants to banter with Alex Costas as usual, but the exchange is cut short when Rory arrives and her composure slips. She and Alex fall into their familiar teasing rhythm, the kind of easy back and forth that usually steadies her, but then Rory appears and the words die in her mouth. Her mask cracks, and the shift is visible enough that the scene turns on it. The easy warmth she had with Alex is gone in an instant, replaced by the frozen politeness of someone trying to hold herself together in front of an audience, and everyone close enough to see it understands that something has changed.

Rory wants to keep his distance and sneer at Poppy's flirting, but when her heel wobbles he grabs her to steady her, then releases her as if burned and insults her shoes. He is clearly determined to be cold, standing apart and looking down his nose at her easy manner with Alex, but the moment her balance goes he reacts before he can stop himself. His hands catch her, hold her, and then he lets go like the contact scalded him, covering the lapse with a jab about her footwear. The instinct and the retreat happen in the same breath, and Poppy is left with the confusing evidence that he moved to help her at all. The insult about her shoes is delivered too quickly, too sharply, as though he is trying to bury the fact that his body moved to catch her before his mind could object, and the contradiction between the catch and the cruelty is something Poppy cannot unsee.

Poppy wants to conduct a professional interview with Rory, but he grunts and insults her and her crew, forcing her to absorb the humiliation on camera. She tries to do her job, to hold the interview together with poise, and he gives her almost nothing, dismissive sounds and cutting remarks aimed not just at her but at the people working alongside her. She has to stand there and take it while the cameras roll, keeping her expression pleasant and her voice level, swallowing the sting in front of an audience. The humiliation is compounded by the fact that it is being recorded, that her crew is watching, that there is no way to walk away without making a scene, and so she absorbs it all with a smile that costs her more than anyone watching can know.

Josh wants to defend Poppy, and he threatens Rory off, which unexpectedly softens Rory's scowl and makes him back down. Josh steps in hard, warning Rory away from her, and the reaction is not the escalation anyone expects. Instead of firing back, Rory's face loosens, the hostility drains out of it, and he retreats. The man who has been needling Poppy all evening folds the moment someone stands up to him on her behalf, a small, strange crack in his armour. The retreat is not surrender exactly, but it is something, and it leaves everyone involved unsettled by how quickly the fight went out of him.

Poppy wants to stay composed as Maggie Hawthorne takes Rory's arm, and she manages a smile while privately wishing she could match Maggie's regal style. Maggie sweeps in and claims Rory's arm with effortless elegance, and Poppy holds her smile in place while something in her chest twists. She cannot help measuring herself against Maggie's poise and presence, and the comparison leaves her feeling small even as she keeps her face bright. The smile is held in place by sheer will, and underneath it the twisting feeling grows, fed by every graceful thing Maggie does without seeming to try.

Maggie wants to praise Poppy's interview skill, and her genuine compliments throw Poppy off balance before Rory pulls Maggie away. Maggie tells Poppy she did well, and the warmth of it is disarming, especially coming from a woman Poppy might expect to be a rival. Before Poppy can gather herself, Rory tugs Maggie off, and the moment of kindness is gone. The praise lands in the middle of Poppy's carefully maintained composure and cracks it, because she was braced for competition and instead received generosity, and she has no defence prepared for that.

Alastair

Alastair Roxburg wants to corner Poppy and grabs her waist and arse on the red carpet, leaving her shaking and frozen. He closes in on her with the confidence of a man who believes he is entitled to the space he takes, and his hands land where they have no business being. The violation leaves her locked up, trembling and unable to move, the professional mask shattered entirely. The shock of it goes through her like cold water, and for a moment she is not a presenter or a professional or anyone with a job to do, she is simply a woman who has been grabbed in public and cannot make herself move.

Rory wants to stop Alastair, and he pulls him off Poppy and confronts him, which makes Alastair flinch and bluster about misunderstandings. Rory wades in and physically hauls Alastair away from her, then turns on him with real fury. Alastair recoils, and his response is a flustered stream of excuses, framing the whole thing as some kind of confusion, anything but an admission. The fury in Rory is genuine and immediate, and it is directed entirely at Alastair, which makes the intervention feel less like gallantry and more like a man who has finally found something he can fight without ambivalence.

Connor Douglas wants to protect Poppy and his charity, and he publicly tells Alastair to sod off, forcing Alastair to stalk away. Connor makes no attempt to smooth things over. He tells Alastair plainly and publicly where to go, and with his authority and the eyes of the event on him, Alastair has no choice but to retreat, humiliated and furious. The public nature of the rebuke is what makes it stick, because Alastair cannot bluster his way out of it with so many witnesses, and his retreat is the retreat of a man who knows he has been beaten in front of an audience.

Rory wants to check on Poppy, and his awkward concern is the first kind words he's said to her in years, though he then glares at her. He asks if she is all right, clumsily, and for a heartbeat he sounds like someone who cares. It is the first gentleness he has shown her in years, and it lands hard, but almost immediately the old hostility snaps back into his face and he glares at her, retreating behind the wall he has built. The gentleness is so unexpected that Poppy does not know what to do with it, and the glare that follows is almost a relief, because it is the Rory she knows, the one she has learned to expect.

Poppy wants to defend her job and independence, and she pushes back when Rory tells her what she needs to do, straining the fragile truce. He starts issuing instructions about what she should do next, and she refuses to be managed. She tells him she can handle her own work, and the brief warmth between them curdles, the truce stretched thin by her need to stand on her own. The pushback is instinctive, because being told what to do by Rory is a particular kind of insult, and she will not accept it even when it might be meant kindly.

Poppy wants to keep working and interviews Connor and Mhairi Douglas, but the sight of their obvious love and Connor's illness brings her to the edge of tears. She pushes through the interviews, doing her job, and finds herself facing a couple whose affection for each other is plain and unguarded. Connor is visibly unwell, and the combination of their devotion and his frailty catches her off guard, so that she has to fight to keep her composure and hold back the tears. The interview becomes a test of endurance, and she passes it only barely, holding herself together by the thinnest of threads.

Poppy finds Mhairi and apologizes, tears spilling over, desperate to crawl into a hole and hide her embarrassment. What she does not expect is for Mhairi to hug her. The embrace costs Poppy her pride, but it earns her Mhairi's sympathy and a promise that Mhairi will find her later. The humiliation of the moment is raw, but the unexpected kindness gives Poppy something to hold onto. The apology was not planned, it simply spilled out of her along with the tears, and the hug that follows is so unexpected that Poppy does not know how to receive it, but she does, and it steadies her.

Josh is there to steady her when she collapses against him, and his rare gentleness does what nothing else could: it shifts her spiralling self-loathing into a fragile, tentative calm. He wants only to keep her upright after the humiliation, and for a moment, it works. The calm is fragile and tentative, but it is calm, and it is more than she had a moment before.

Across the party, Rory watches Poppy. He wants to deny his fixation, to look anywhere else, but he cannot. Maggie catches him staring and calls it out, forcing him to admit that Poppy is "fun." The admission unsettles his grudge, cracking the certainty he has carried about her. The word "fun" is not much, but it is not contempt either, and it is enough to make him uneasy about everything he has told himself.

The Party Turns

Poppy pulls Connor, Mhairi, and other guests into Irish dancing, determined to lift the mood of the room. The laughter she creates ripples outward, and it reaches Rory in a way nothing else has: he sees Connor smile again, and his resentment cracks. The dancing is silly and joyful and entirely without dignity, and that is precisely why it works, because it gives everyone permission to stop performing and simply enjoy themselves.

Maggie confronts Rory about his grudge against Poppy, wanting to understand the hostility she keeps sensing in him. Rory flashes back to the World Cup interview, revealing the humiliation he has nursed for five years. The memory is vivid and bitter, the wound still open. The flashback is not a defence, it is a confession, and it shows how much of his behaviour has been built on a moment that Poppy may not even remember.

He recalls Poppy's teenage crush and the night she confessed her love in his room. He wanted to protect her and himself, and his refusal to act on it ended with her promising to wait for him. The memory sits uneasily alongside his anger. The promise to wait is the part that stings, because it is the part that makes him wonder whether he has been angry at the wrong person all along.

Maggie tells Rory he takes life too seriously and deserves something he actually wants, urging him to be honest with himself. Then she leaves him at the party alone, calling him a shitty date. Her words land, but Rory does not follow. He stays where he is, alone with the accusation and the truth of it, and does nothing.

Rory and Mhairi

Rory admits to Mhairi that he knows Poppy, dismissing her as a pain, wanting to keep his distance.

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Part 2 - Chapters 5 to 8

The Roxburg Ball

Poppy arrives at the Roxburg event determined to keep her head clear, asking for non-alcoholic champagne but settling for the real thing when the server offers nothing else. The drink chips away at her usual caution, and the sight of Rory across the room unsettles her further, leaving her more vulnerable than she intends to be.

The champagne loosens a memory she has kept buried: Rory caring for her when she was drunk at seventeen, looking after her with a gentleness that surfaces now with painful clarity. In that recollection Poppy realizes the truth she has avoided for years. She falls in love with him then, and the feeling never fully leaves her.

Alastair's Interference

Alastair Roxburg steps into her path and grabs her arm, making excuses for behavior that has no excuse. The confrontation is exactly the kind Poppy hates, leaving her shaken and cornered rather than in control. She reaches for her champagne to steady her nerves, but the drink does not settle her. Instead she begins to feel disoriented and uncoordinated, her body refusing to obey her, and she understands with growing alarm that something is wrong beyond simple drunkenness.

The Fall

Poppy staggers across the ballroom and collides with Rory, collapsing against him. Her head strikes a display table as she goes down, and the blow knocks her unconscious. She is bleeding, and Rory catches her before she hits the floor completely.

Rory lifts Poppy and carries her out of the ballroom, shielding her from Alastair and making the decision to take her home himself. He brings her to the Sterling townhouse, where he argues with Rafe, insisting that Poppy is out of control. Rafe defends her, and the argument deepens Rory's misjudgment of the situation, his frustration hardening into a certainty that he is right and she is reckless.

Clara's Fury

Clara confronts Rory furiously for hurting Poppy, and in her anger she reveals the bleeding head wound he had not noticed. The sight of it shames him, the evidence of his failure to see what was in front of him. Rafe orders Rory to leave and slams the door in his face, costing Rory any chance to explain himself or check on Poppy. He walks away aching with regret, more shaken than he has ever been before a World Cup match.

The Apology at Granny's

Rory arrives at Granny's house to apologize to Poppy, enduring Granny's open hostility about the World Cup loss before he can reach her. When Poppy confronts him about why he came, he apologizes for calling her stupid to Mhairi and for failing to notice her injury. Poppy dismisses the apology and points out that his low opinion of her has been clear for five years, rejecting his attempt to revisit their past.

Rory steps toward her and suggests they talk about the past, backing her against the kitchen island as the tension between them builds. His closeness undoes her resolve, and she can barely hold on to her composure. Poppy tries to escape his pull, wanting to protect herself from being hurt again, but she goes up on her toes just before their lips touch. Granny's scream breaks the moment, forcing Poppy to abandon Rory and run to the garden.

Poppy finds Granny fallen by the hydrangeas and tries to help her up, but discovers she is too weak to lift her alone. Rory offers to assist and lifts Granny effortlessly, earning her grudging acceptance. Poppy gets Granny settled with tea, then hustles Rory into the corridor.

Rory questions why there is no staff and learns that Poppy has sacrificed her independence to care for Granny. Poppy confronts Rory and tells him he broke her heart five years ago. She declares she deserves better, and Rory deflates and agrees she is right.

At Twickenham, Rory tries to watch the match but keeps watching Poppy work the corporate box for Connor's MND fundraiser. Poppy comforts Cleo and carries the child around the box for half an hour. Connor takes the sleeping Cleo, and Rory is hit by the reality of Connor's declining strength.

Rory reflects that he suggested Poppy for the fundraiser, knowing it was unfair but unable to stay away. He recalls confronting Rafe about Clara Mason's dangerous family and getting the door slammed in his face. Across the box, Poppy flirts with the RFU chairman to secure the stadium for the record attempt, ignoring Rory entirely. Rory pushes up from his chair and stalks toward the chairman as Poppy stands in the man's personal space.

Part 3 - Chapters 9 to 12

Poppy refills Hargreaves's glass and leans into the flattery, stroking his ego with the practiced ease of someone who has decided the prize is worth the price. Every ounce of patience she spends on him costs her something, and the dignity she sets aside to keep him talking is a currency she pays without letting him see the till. She needs Twickenham, and Hargreaves holds the key to it, so she smiles and pours and lets him believe the conversation is about him. The performance is deliberate and unrelenting, each compliment calibrated to keep him comfortable and talking, each topped-up glass a small investment in a return she cannot yet see. She gives him the version of herself that costs the least to spend and hides the rest behind a smile that never falters, because the venue she needs lives in his hands and she has decided that the price of getting it is worth paying.

Rory watches it happen and something in him snaps. He steps in and physically moves Hargreaves away from Poppy, inserting himself between them with a force that strains his self-control. The intervention is not subtle, and it costs Rory visibly to keep himself in check rather than do worse. The anger behind the move is barely contained, and the effort of holding it back shows in every line of him, but he does not let it go further than the shove that separates them.

But Poppy does not let the moment go to waste. She draws Hargreaves back into conversation, steering him toward lineout talk, and then she calls him an innovator. The word lands exactly where she aims it. Hargreaves's stance shifts from refusal to openness, the flattery doing what pressure could not. The shift is visible in him, the resistance draining out of his posture as the compliment settles, and Poppy presses the advantage without appearing to press at all.

He agrees to explore the proposal with the RFU board. It is not a yes, but it is a real chance at a venue for the world record attempt, and Poppy has won it with nothing but talk and a topped-up glass. The opening is small but real, and she has bought it without giving Hargreaves anything he recognizes as a concession.

The Sterlings Close Ranks

The Sterlings are not impressed. They doubt Poppy's competence outright and offer Rafe to check her proposal, a suggestion that lands like a verdict on her work and her judgment both. The implication is clear: they do not trust her to have done it right, and they want their own eyes on it. Poppy's confidence takes the hit. The offer of Rafe is not framed as help but as correction, and the room hears it that way, the family's lack of faith made plain in a single suggestion that reduces her work to something requiring supervision.

Rory defends her to her family. He puts himself against their disapproval, risking their good opinion to say plainly that Poppy knows what she is doing. The defense exposes his feelings more than he perhaps intends, and the room registers it. The words are not measured or diplomatic, and the heat behind them tells everyone present something Rory has not said aloud, the protection in his voice outrunning the discretion he meant to keep.

Granny Sterling backs Poppy and calls out the family's underestimation of her, naming the pattern aloud. The judgment in the room shifts. What was a pile-on becomes something more divided, with Granny's voice carrying weight the others cannot simply dismiss. The accusation is direct and cannot be waved away, and it forces the family to reckon with the habit of doubt they have turned on one of their own.

Connor, Brick, and Grayson confirm Poppy's importance to the project, adding their standing to hers. The men who know the work say what she is worth to it, and the family's doubts lose their footing. Their testimony is not sentimental but practical, the judgment of people who have seen the work up close, and it carries a weight the Sterlings cannot easily set aside.

Poppy deflects it all with self-deprecation, brushing off the defense as though it were nothing, and then thanks Rory privately. The thanks soften the truce between them, a small warmth in place of the usual friction. The moment is brief and quiet, but it marks a shift, the two of them standing on gentler ground than before.

Then Rory calls her "mo chridhe." The words startle her, and the unresolved tension between them deepens rather than clears. Whatever the phrase means, it is not the language of a truce, and Poppy does not know what to do with it. The words hang between them unanswered, and the uncertainty they leave behind is heavier than the friction they replaced.

A Gentler Side

Rory coaches Danny through his insecurity, and Poppy watches him do it. The patience he shows the boy, the way he steadies him, reveals a gentler side she has not seen, and it changes her view of him. The man who physically moved Hargreaves away from her is also the man who can talk a nervous kid through his fear, and Poppy has to hold both versions at once. The contrast unsettles her, because the tenderness she is watching does not fit the man she has been braced against, and she cannot dismiss either version as the false one.

Maggie then reveals she is not dating Rory at all, and hints that his interest lies elsewhere. The admission embarrasses Rory and relieves Poppy in equal measure, and the hint hangs in the air between all three of them. The relief is immediate and unwelcome in its clarity, and the hint gives it a direction Poppy is not ready to look at directly.

The Confrontation Outside

Rory pulls Poppy outside to confront her about Clara's criminal family. He wants to control her choices, to steer her away from the connection, and he does not dress the concern up as anything softer than interference. Poppy rejects it. She accuses him of judging her without knowing her, of passing sentence on a situation he has not bothered to understand, and the accusation leaves her in tears. The tears are not a retreat but the overflow of a frustration that has been building, and she does not soften the charge to spare him.

Rory hugs her. In the middle of the fight he pulls her close and admits he does not think she is "too stupid to live," the words rough and reluctant but unmistakably a concession. For a moment the distance he has kept from her breaks. The admission is dragged out of him against his own resistance, and the closeness that comes with it is as much a surrender as a comfort.

Then Poppy pulls away and flees back into the pub, and Rory is left outside questioning himself and the damage he has done. The question turns over the same ground without settling, and he is left with the knowledge that he has hurt her and no clear way to undo it.

The Actor and the Photographer

Rory arrives at training determined to watch Poppy, but his focus collapses the moment he sees her outfit. He is distracted by what she is wearing and by his own simmering frustration, and the combination costs him his concentration. He becomes snappier with everyone around him, his temper fraying as his attention keeps sliding back to her instead of the work at hand. The distraction is not something he can discipline away, and it leaks into every instruction he gives, his patience thinning with each glance he cannot stop himself from taking.

He tries to avoid discussing any of this with Connor, but Connor's terminal illness gives him a license to make uncomfortable observations that no one else would dare voice. Connor cuts straight through Rory's evasions and exposes the fixation Rory is trying so hard to hide. The exposure leaves Rory with nowhere to retreat and no way to pretend the problem belongs to anyone but himself. Connor names what Rory has been refusing to name, and the naming makes it real in a way Rory cannot argue with.

When the actors start touching Poppy, Rory cannot stand it. He whistles the squad back to practice, using the whistle as cover for what is really driving him. The move reveals his jealousy and his lack of control, and everyone present can see it even if no one names it outright. The whistle is too sharp and too sudden to be about the training, and the squad responds to it knowing exactly what they are responding to.

Rory tries to resist his obsession with Poppy, but he cannot. His fantasies and the memory of their kiss leave him aroused and utterly unable to train properly. His body and mind work against the discipline he is supposed to be modeling for the squad, and the struggle leaves him more frustrated than before. The resistance fails on every front, and the failure leaves him further from the control he is supposed to embody.

The Confrontation

Poppy wants to photograph the squad for promotion, and she sets about it with purpose. Rory confronts her instead and insults her outfit, and the remark lands hard. It costs her the smile she had been wearing and pushes her to defend herself, the easy warmth between them turning sharp. The insult is not playful and she does not receive it as such, and the purpose she arrived with is swallowed by the need to answer him.

Poppy tries to justify her golf attire, explaining herself reasonably, but Rory will not let it go. He accuses her of swanning around and of failing to promote the event, escalating the confrontation with every word. What began as a jab about her clothes becomes an indictment of her whole presence at the course. The escalation is relentless, each accusation building on the last until her right to be there at all is what is being questioned.

Poppy decides to humiliate him in return. She sarcastically agrees with his sexist assumptions, giving him exactly the ugly logic he implied, and then stalks away. The exit leaves Rory standing in the wrong, his own words turned into a mirror he cannot look away from. The sarcasm is precise and cutting, and it leaves him exposed in front of everyone who heard the exchange.

As the actor walks past Rory, he mutters that Rory is an asshole. The rebuke is quiet but unmistakable, and it further exposes Rory, confirming that his behavior has been witnessed and judged by everyone around him. The judgment is not softened by being muttered, and it lands with the weight of a verdict delivered by someone with no stake in sparing him.

Connor's Truth

Connor wants Rory to understand what Poppy is actually doing, so he explains her promotional strategy. He lays out her golf win and the need for attention it gives the charity, making the case plainly enough that Rory has to concede the point. Rory admits he is a wanker, the words dragged out of him by the weight of Connor's explanation. The admission is not gracious but it is honest, and it costs him something to say it.

Then Connor wants to be honest about his declining health. He admits he cannot pass to the left, and the confession devastates Rory. It cements the urgency of the world record attempt, turning what had been an ambitious goal into something with a hard and closing deadline. The confession changes the meaning of everything they have been working toward, and Rory receives it as the blow it is.

Rory wants to support Connor, so he shares a forehead-touch moment with him, the gesture carrying everything he cannot say. In the silence of it, he acknowledges that Poppy is doing more for the charity than he is, the realization settling in alongside his guilt. The gesture holds what words cannot, and the acknowledgment that comes with it reframes Poppy's work in a light Rory can no longer avoid.

The Apology and the Ball

Rory wants to apologize to Poppy, so he approaches her with the words "I'm a dickhead and I'm sorry." But his presence and his muddy body leave her breathless and distracted, the apology undercut by the sheer physical effect he has on her. The words are right but the moment is not, and her body responds to him before her mind can organize a reply.

Poppy wants to know why she winds him up, so she asks him directly. Rory deflects, calling himself a grumpy git and stepping back rather than answering her honestly, retreating from the question he cannot afford to examine. The retreat is a refusal dressed as self-deprecation, and it leaves the question unanswered between them.

Then Brick wants to warn Poppy about an incoming ball, shouting the alert. Rory wants to protect her, so he lifts her out of the way and catches the ball, holding her against him far longer than necessary. The save becomes something else entirely, the two of them frozen in the aftermath. The danger passes but the closeness does not, and neither of them moves to end it.

Poppy wants Rory to kiss her, and the moment stretches toward it. But Josh interrupts, telling Rory to put her down, and the spell breaks.

Part 4 - Chapters 13 to 15

The Coat and the Confession

Rory catches Poppy outside the club, and the confrontation immediately strips away his composure. He learns she is stranded, without a phone and without a car, and the realization lands on him hard: his behavior has hurt her, and the damage is not abstract. Poppy stands there in the aftermath of whatever passed between them inside, and Rory, who has spent years keeping the upper hand, finds himself on unsteady ground. The scene shifts from the noise and heat of the club to the raw, exposed space between two people who have been circling each other for years. The discovery that she has no way home is what breaks through his defenses, because it turns an argument he thought he could win into a situation where she is genuinely vulnerable and he is the cause of it. His composure, the thing he has relied on for years, is gone, and he is left facing the consequences of his own behavior with no way to dress them up.

He offers her his coat and insists on taking her home. It is a gesture that tries to repair something, to reassert a version of himself as decent, but Poppy refuses. She cries, and the tears undo him. Rory is forced into an apology, not for a single night's slight but for years of meanness, for every cruelty he has aimed at her. The apology costs him his guardedness, and it costs her too, because accepting it means admitting how much his treatment has mattered to her. The power between them tilts, and neither of them is comfortable with where it lands. The coat is refused, the ride home is refused, and every attempt he makes to reassert himself as decent is turned back, until the only thing left for him to do is admit what he has done. The apology is not a single moment of weakness but an accounting of years, and it leaves him exposed in a way he has never allowed himself to be. For Poppy, hearing it is its own kind of cost, because to accept an apology for years of cruelty is to admit that the cruelty landed, that it mattered, that she has been carrying it.

Poppy then admits the thing she has carried for years: she has always had a crush on Rory. The admission costs her pride and leaves her completely exposed, standing in front of the person who has been her tormentor and handing him the truth of her feelings. It is a confession that could be weaponized, and she knows it. Rory does not mock her. Instead he confesses in return, admitting an obsessive attraction and a possessiveness toward her that shatters his own guardedness. The boy who has spent years performing indifference admits that she has been under his skin, that his cruelty was tangled up with wanting. The two confessions sit between them, and the air changes. What makes the moment so charged is that both of them have handed over the thing they have spent years protecting. Poppy has given him the truth of her feelings knowing he could use it against her, and Rory has given up the performance of indifference that has kept him safe, admitting that the meanness was tangled up with wanting her. The air between them changes because there is nothing left to hide behind.

Connor's Decline

The conversation turns, and Poppy discovers that Connor's condition is worsening. The revelation reframes everything: Rory's tension, his distraction, the cracks in his performance. Rory admits his helplessness over his friend's decline, and for the first time he sounds like someone with no move left to make. The stakes of the night widen beyond the two of them. Connor is fading, and Rory, who controls so much, cannot control this. Poppy sees him without the armor, and what she sees is grief he cannot fix or hide. The discovery explains the tension she has been sensing in him all night, the distraction that kept breaking through his performance, and it changes the shape of the evening. What began as a confrontation between the two of them now has a larger weight pressing on it. Rory, who has spent years controlling every situation he is in, is faced with something he cannot control at all, and the helplessness in his voice is new. Poppy sees him without the armor, and what she sees is grief he cannot fix or hide, a version of Rory she has never been allowed to see before.

The Office

Rory kisses her, and she responds. The kiss carries all the years of friction and the confessions that just passed between them, and it moves them out of the night air and into his office, where they have sex on his desk. The scene is impulsive and charged, the culmination of everything that has been building. For a moment the class lines, the history of meanness, and the fear of what others will think all fall away, and there is only the two of them and the thing they have finally stopped denying. Everything that has been building between them, the years of friction and the confessions that just passed, is carried into the kiss, and the move from the night air into his office is a move out of the world where the class lines and the history of meanness and the fear of what others will think still apply. For that moment none of it applies, and there is only the two of them and the thing they have finally stopped denying.

Then the aftermath arrives, and it is not kind. Poppy feels humiliated. She scrambles to dress, her mind already racing to the worst conclusion: that Rory still has a low opinion of her, that this was confirmation rather than connection. The vulnerability of the confession returns doubled, because now her body has been part of it. She is exposed in a way she cannot take back, and she braces for the dismissal she has learned to expect from him. The humiliation is not about what happened but about what it might mean, and her mind races to the worst conclusion available: that Rory still has a low opinion of her, that the encounter was confirmation of that low opinion rather than a connection between them. The vulnerability of the confession returns doubled, because now her body has been part of it, and she is exposed in a way she cannot take back. She braces for the dismissal she has learned to expect from him, dressing as fast as she can.

Rory reassures her. He tells her the encounter was amazing, and he holds her. The tenderness is real, and for a moment it seems the night might resolve into something Poppy has wanted for years. But then he refuses to offer a relationship. He cites their different social classes and his fear of Rafe, naming the obstacles that stand between them as though they are immovable. The refusal lands like a door closing. Poppy concludes that Rory finds her good enough to sleep with but not to date, and she resolves to hide her hurt. She will not give him the satisfaction of seeing how much this cuts, and she will not let him see her cry again. The decision hardens something in her, and the warmth of the office drains away. The tenderness he shows her is real, and for a moment it seems the night might resolve into something she has wanted for years, but the refusal that follows undoes it. He names their different social classes and his fear of Rafe as though they are immovable, and the refusal lands like a door closing. Poppy draws the conclusion the refusal points at: that he finds her good enough to sleep with but not to date. She resolves to hide her hurt, to not give him the satisfaction of seeing how much this cuts, and to not let him see her cry again. The decision hardens something in her, and the warmth of the office drains away.

The Van

Rory drives Poppy home in his mud-covered VW van. The vehicle is a small revelation in itself, a far cry from the polished image he projects, and Poppy softens toward him despite the brush-off. The ride is quiet and strange, the two of them sitting close in a beat-up van after everything that has happened, and the contrast between the night's intensity and this ordinary, muddy drive makes the refusal feel even more confusing. She is hurt, but she is also watching him, and what she sees is not the untouchable boy she has resented for years. The van is a small revelation, a far cry from the polished image he projects, and despite the brush-off Poppy softens toward him. The ride is quiet and strange, the two of them sitting close in a beat-up van after everything that has happened, and the contrast between the intensity of the night and this ordinary, muddy drive makes the refusal feel even more confusing. She is hurt, but she is also watching him, and what she sees is not the untouchable boy she has resented for years.

Then she discovers a different-colored team jersey in the van, and she questions him about it. The jersey does not belong to Rory, and its presence in his van raises a question she cannot let go of. The detail sits there, unexplained, a small crack in the story he has told her. After the confessions and the refusal and the drive home, the jersey is one more thing Poppy does not understand about Rory, and it leaves her with a question that will not resolve itself tonight. The jersey does not belong to him, and its presence raises a question she cannot let go of, a small crack in the story he has told her. After the confessions and the refusal and the drive home, it is one more thing she does not understand about him, and it leaves her with a question that will not resolve itself tonight.

Rory reveals he provides kit for Connor's kids' team, and the admission lands differently than Poppy expects. It shows her a generous side of him she hadn't accounted for, and it softens her toward him despite everything. The warmth doesn't last. When his voice tightens over Connor, Poppy feels the pull to comfort him and deliberately suppresses it, choosing distance over intimacy because she knows exactly where closeness with Rory leads. The admission shows her a generous side of him she had not accounted for, and it softens her toward him despite everything. But the warmth does not last. When his voice tightens over Connor, she feels the pull to comfort him and deliberately suppresses it, choosing distance over intimacy because she knows exactly where closeness with Rory leads.

Rory isn't willing to let her retreat. He stops Poppy from leaving the car and apologizes, then admits he can't stop thinking about her. The confession hangs there, raw and unguarded, and Poppy responds by testing it. She demands to know whether he would tell her brother about them, a direct question about whether he is serious or just passing time. Rory's answer gives her everything she needs to know: he admits Rafe would kill him. It is a confession of fear dressed up as honesty, and it reveals he won't commit. Poppy tells him to stay away from her. He stops her from leaving the car and apologizes, then admits he cannot stop thinking about her, and the confession hangs there raw and unguarded. Poppy tests it by demanding to know whether he would tell her brother about them, a direct question about whether he is serious or just passing time. His answer gives her everything she needs to know: he admits Rafe would kill him. It is a confession of fear dressed up as honesty, and it reveals he will not commit. She tells him to stay away from her.

Rory whispers that he can't stay away and cups her jaw, the gesture intimate and desperate all at once. Poppy pulls free and leaves the car, deciding in that moment that she deserves more than a man who wants her only in the dark. The decision costs her, but she makes it cleanly. He whispers that he cannot stay away and cups her jaw, the gesture intimate and desperate all at once, but she pulls free and leaves the car. In that moment she decides she deserves more than a man who wants her only in the dark. The decision costs her, but she makes it cleanly.

The Record Attempt and the Cameras

Rory learns from Poppy that over four hundred people are involved in the world record attempt, a number that forces him to abandon his pub venue idea entirely. The scale of the event has outgrown his plans, and the news clearly unsettles him. Mhairi then warns him that cameras are filming his scowling face, forcing him to fake cheerfulness for the content whether he likes it or not. Poppy twists the knife without meaning to, or perhaps meaning to: she tells him that once the event ends he'll never face cameras again. The words land as a revelation. She means to cut him out of her life, and Rory realizes it. The number forces him to abandon his pub venue idea entirely, because the scale of the event has outgrown his plans, and the news clearly unsettles him.

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About the Author

Susie Tate

Susie Tate is a British author and practicing doctor who writes contemporary romance and women's fiction, often drawing on her medical background to create authentic hospital settings and complex characters. She is best known for her bestselling books, including "Broken Heart Syndrome," "Beyond Repair," and the "Goldstone" series. Her work is recognized for combining emotional, character-driven storytelling with realistic depictions of life in medicine.

Frequently Asked Questions about Deal Breaker

What is Deal Breaker about?
The story centers on Poppy, a woman trying to hold her professional ground while facing Rory, a man who has spent years treating her with contempt. Their charged, long-running tension intensifies across awards events, charity functions, family visits, and public appearances as Poppy pursues a venue she needs and Rory’s protectiveness clashes with his carefully maintained composure. The stakes are both personal and public: Poppy must guard her dignity and her heart while Rory confronts the consequences of his behavior under family pressure and press scrutiny.
Who is the author of Deal Breaker?
The author is Susie Tate. The supplied chapters focus on Poppy and Rory’s story and the supporting cast around them; no further author biography is included in the provided material.
Is Deal Breaker worth reading?
It is worth reading for the sharp, slow-burn tension between Poppy and Rory, whose years of antagonism give way to charged, vulnerable moments. The story balances public events and family pressure with intimate scenes, and Rory’s protectiveness and Poppy’s determination make their push-pull compelling.
What are the main themes in Deal Breaker?
The novel explores long-held resentment and attraction, the cost of keeping up appearances, and the vulnerability beneath professional composure. Family acceptance and shame are central, especially in the contrast between the warmth Poppy’s family shows Rory and the cold treatment Poppy received from his. Public scrutiny, protectiveness, and the struggle to let someone care for you also run through the story, alongside grief and hope in the charity-event scenes.
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